The first (rather long and convoluted) sentence I wrote today was…

The journey to the deep-sea camping shelter passed uneventfully for Emily and Dahlia, as most sub journeys did, since Marcasero, so far as anyone had yet determined, was entirely free of “sea monsters” (or any underwater lifeform larger than, say, an old-Earth grouper) and even the most violent surface storm couldn’t roil the water to the depth to which they were descending.

Current word count: 31,919
New words this session: 1,427
Percentage of novel completed: 31.9

Yeah, I know, it’s not a very good sentence…but (all together now): “I’ll fix it later!”

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