The first sentences I wrote yesterday…

For Blue Fire:

Bound, gagged, stripped and then dressed again with no more thought to his personal wishes or privacy than if he had been a dressmaker’s dummy, Petra could do nothing but fume and pray that Vekk would strike them all dead with Blue Fire for daring to touch one of his Priest-Apprentices.

Words yesterday: 845

Total thus far: 15,561

(I know, I know, how do you strip and then dress somebody whose arms and legs are bound? I’ll fix it in the rewrite.)

For Magebane:

The fact was, he hadn’t seen his father in the flesh for…what? Two months?

Words yesterday: 2,605

Total thus far: 25,610

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